-recognise how many tens and hundreds are in numbers
Here is my work.
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Title
A Short Statement about the topic.
eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’
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Pets Are Good
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Overview/ Statement of position
A brief statement of your view about the topic. What you believe or want to argue.
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Series of Arguments
Reasons
Your points supporting your view about the topic. Your k arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments.
Remember
-argument
-supporting detail, reasons, examples
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Firstly, pets are good animals because they can help disabled people with walking across the road. Blind people have a lot more independence if they have a dog to help them. Dogs are now being trained to be able to sniff out cancer genes in people.
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Secondly, dogs help people kill animals and to find dead wild animals, so the hunters find it easier to find what they have killed. At the airport the sniffer dogs sniff out drugs and guns.
Thirdly, There are pets that provide food like cows, chickens, pigs and other animals. The food and drinks are milk, bacon, eggs, meat, beef and pork chops.
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Fourthly farm dogs help round up farm animals like cows and sheep.
They are good at getting livestock from steep hills.
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Finally, pets are good with comforting people if they’re alone (tahanga). When people are alone they can get depressed and need medication which costs a lot of money.
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Concluding statement
Summing it up. A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.
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In conclusion pets are super duper good to have around and in your life. Pets can help you, find you when you’re lost and last but not least they love you. EVERYBODY NEEDS LOVE
The End
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Title
A Short Statement about the topic.
eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’
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Fix Our Field
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Overview/ Statement of position
A brief statement of your view about the topic. What you believe or want to argue.
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I strongly believe we should fix the school field. We need to fix the field because it is wet most of the time so we can’t go on it and we need to do important sports training and special events.
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Series of Arguments
Reasons
Your points supporting your view about the topic. Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments.
Remember
-argument
-supporting detail, reasons, examples
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Firstly, the Board of trustees and Mrs Truman should fix the field because everyone is crowded kids need to play, run, train and Another issue is people need to train for tournaments, events.
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Secondly, sometimes when a ball goes over the fence it takes ages to get it back.
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Thirdly, kids can get hurt really bad because it's crowded with lots of students around. Because people get in the way of other people's games then
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Finally, it’s a waste> (moumou) of money because there's equipment the school does not use the field because the it's off limits.
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Concluding statement
Summing it up. A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.
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In conclusion we need to fix our field because we don’t have enough room to play in, we need the field for sport> (hākinakina) training special events
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