Descriptive Writing

At the moment in class we have been working on descriptive writing. We have been using pictures to give us ideas of what to write about. Here is a piece of writing I did.

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Bring Your Dinosaur To School Day

One day the teacher said it was bring your pet to school tomorrow so I brought my pet dinosaur.

First I had to clean my dinosaur’s teeth and then polish it’s claws.

SO after I had done that I had to try and fit him into the car.

But he couldn’t fit so I called Grandad to bring his truck and put Andy the dinosaur in the back.

Then we got to school and everyone saw him and then teachers seen him and they didn’t really like him.

Then I got sent to the office so the teachers told me to call my Grandad to pick up Andy so I called my Grandad and told him to pick up Andy.

    Then my Grandad picked Andy up and left I was sad and I knew Andy was to because I could hear him crying but roars “RoAr”.

                                                                                                                                          

Now I’m in big trouble for bringing a dinosaur to school.

So yeah that’s the end bye!!