Tuesday, 14 March 2017

My Sea Week Writing

For Sea Week we wrote about why the ocean is important. Here is my writing work. please leave a kind, positive and thoughtful comment.
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous16 March 2017 at 14:48

    Hi Callan.I really liked how used Maori words.Second I really liked how you said that you like cooking sausages with your family. Next time write more about you and your family. From Cullam

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  2. Unknown20 March 2017 at 21:56

    Hi Callan, I enjoyed reading what you wrote about the ocean and why we love it as a family. We should remember to take some rubbish bags with us next time we go down there so we can pick up any rubbish and keep it out of the ocean. Mum.

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  3. Anonymous28 March 2017 at 14:49

    Hi Mum thanks for the comment and you are right, next time we go to the beach we should pick up rubbish. So once again thanks for the comment.

    From your lovely son Callan.

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