Wednesday 27 September 2017

The Bee Keeper

Quick Write Number One - The Beekeeper

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For the next two weeks we are going to work on ‘Quick Writes.’  This is where you are given something to write about (a writing prompt) and you only have 10mins to write as much as possible using this writing prompt.

For our writing prompts we will use either images or short videos.

The purpose of this is to practise writing fluently.

When we look at our writing prompt we will have about 10-15 mins to discuss it and brainstorm some ideas and vocabulary.   

Our learning goals are to:
-write a description, using powerful words and phrases
-include some Te Reo Māori
-carefully check that our sentences make sense and have correct punctuation and spelling.

When we are writing we need to think about…

  1. What do I want my reader to see?
2) What do I want my reader to hear?
3) What do I want my reader to smell?
Tips:
-look closely at the picture or video
-think about the three key questions and the learning goals
-give yourself time to plan and write


Do your writing here
The Bee Man
The person that gets honey from the bees is the BEE MAN. The bee man gets sweet, sugary,  and strong yellow honey to put on his toast in the morning. In the warm spring day listening to the buzzing bees.

Thursday 21 September 2017

Robot Rampage Work

This term we have been learning to write a narrative piece of writing. Here is my story about Toiletbot 2000.  


Elections Work 2017

This term my class has been learning about the New Zealand Elections so me and two best friends teamed up to to make a poster for our party.
 Work down here⬇